The poem in your second post was very good. This one... well, love's always been the most potent emotion, for good or bad. "Him" is to the point and (very) well constructed... kinda like the movie "Hot Fuzz" (British cop comedy, bizarre correlation, I know)
I'm not in the BBS/ forum here so much, but I'm sure there's thread for folks who like to kick it round, rhyme and meter-wise.
VicariousE
The poem in your second post was very good. This one... well, love's always been the most potent emotion, for good or bad. "Him" is to the point and (very) well constructed... kinda like the movie "Hot Fuzz" (British cop comedy, bizarre correlation, I know)
I'm not in the BBS/ forum here so much, but I'm sure there's thread for folks who like to kick it round, rhyme and meter-wise.